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The Litte Mermaid?

Reported By: Zayas Man

I must admit this is one akward fic. (but then again so are most Mary sues I have read) The author sure has an obsession with Disney's The Little Mermaid.

Story Or Series Title: Seven Days
Fandom: Mega Man
Maverick Author's Name: MARISA

Full Name (plus titles if any): Fei Aipei. It was Chinese, and it had "something to do with beauty or love or something."</b>
Full Species(es): Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): not stated.
Eye Color (include adjectives): not stated. For being the "love" of Mega Man's life, the author sure didn't go out of her way to describe her.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: The only statement used to describe her is when Mega Man glanced at her face, "he was filled with a sudden mix of emotions he couldn't describe, all of them plesant."

Annoying Origin: One day Mega Man passes her on her everyday route from school to home. Ever since then, he becomes obsessed with her.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: After Mega Man becomes infatuated with her, he wants to become human so he can win her heart. (thus making him into a very whiney and depressed character) He has his chance when he meets a mysterious woman who can make him human but at the cost of his voice.
Annoying Special Abilities: She doesn't do much, but she can make tea!
Other Annoying Traits: She is single since all the men she ever dated, "talked dirty and eat"
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

(This takes place after Mega Man turns human and loses his voice.)

"I hope you like tea." Aipei handed Rock the cup.

Rock watched her as she took a drink from a similar cup, and followed her actions. The sensations shocked him. He had never tasted anything before, and this tea gave his mouth a soft warm buzz. He wasn't exactly sure what to do with the tea once it was in his mouth, because the insides of a human were much different than those of a robot, and he wanted to make sure he didn't do anything wrong and choke to death. Luckily, reflex kicked in. His tongue moved backwards and pushed the tea down his throat, and he smiled, feeling the warm tea glide down his throat and warm him all over.

"Like it? My mother grows the leaves herself." Aipei smiled. She had invited Rock over after guessing his name, and he immediately accepted.

Rock looked around, admiring the watercolor paintings covering the walls of the living room.

Aipei followed his gaze, and explained, "My father is an aritist." She smiled cheerfully, "It's kind of funny, because I can't even draw a decent stick figure." She giggled, and Rock smiled.

Rock sipped the last of his tea, and set the cup down on a coffee table. The sun streamed in through the large windows, casting a golden light on the two. Rock stood up, and walked to the paintings to admire them up close.

"Wonderful artist, isn't he?" Aipei questioned. Rock turned and smiled, nodding in agreement.

Aipei smiled back, and sipped the last few drops of her tea.

//He's so different from other boys!/ She thought, //He's so polite, which is more than I can say for most of the guys I know./

She smiled to herself. Most of her friends set her up with guys, trying to get her a boyfriend. But all those men did were talk dirty and eat. They never even glanced at her father's paintings, and here Rock was, unable to take his eyes off them!


Find the rest here: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=732468&chapter=1
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